Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Evaluation question 1







Radio trailer Roll with it



  • Throughout the radio trailer there is a music bed which has been used for the intro and then be quietened down so is at a suitable level so the audience can here the narrator speaking. This keeps the advert up beat and flowing engaging an audience.
  • As soon as the voice over starts speaking she say the word " bowling" so the audience starlight away no its to do with bowling.
  • It then goes on to ask a question " but why have bowling alleys become the main sale of retail parks?" this engages the audience as it is making the audience think about the question keeping them involved and wanting to know more.
  • We have used the same voice over that that we use for our documentary.
  • There are various clips from our documentary throughout the radio advert for example vox poxs and clips from peoples interviews this gives the audience and insight of our documentary.
  • The radio trailer ends with the date the time the channel that the program will be showing" Thursday 9th of January on 4" following the codes and conventions.









Monday, 14 April 2014

Evaluation question 3

What have you learned from you audience feedback?

After completing our documentary radio trailer and print advert we presented our work to a number of people to get feedback to see what they liked and disliked. I asked these people to complete a questionnaire were I gained constructive feedback.



Here are videos of people answering questions about my documentary.




This is me talking about the results that we gained




Documentary Questions

1) Does the first five minutes of the documentary make you want to watch more?

2) What do you think of the voiceover?

3) What do you think about the music?

4) What do you think the strengths and weaknesses are for the documentary?

5) What do you think about the cutaways? Are they relevant?

Radio Trailer Questions

1) Does the radio trailer make you want to watch our documentary?

2) What do you think about the voiceover?

3) Does it sound professional?

4) What do you think the strengths and weaknesses are for the radio trailer?

Poster advert Questions

1) Does the poster make you want to watch the documentary?

2) Does the image on the print advert relate to the topic?

3) What do you think the strengths and weaknesses are for the poster advert?

Here are our results:






Friday, 4 April 2014

Filming Vox Pops

As a group we went to Liscard and New Brighton to film our vox pops for our documentary we asked them short questions. It was a challenge as allot of people were not keen on the idea of getting recorded.

Vox pox questions:


  •    Do you enjoy bowling?
  •    Who do you go bowling with?
  •    How often do you go bowling?
  •    Describe bowling in three words?
  •    What else do you do when you go bowling?
  •    Would you recommend bowling to others?

Thursday, 3 April 2014

Print advert draft

Before creating our print advert we decided that we should do a rough sketch of it first. We wanted it to look visually interesting. We decided on a bowling ball with pins by using an effect it will look like that pins are falling over.



Questionnaire for audience feedback

Here are the questionnaires for our audience feedback








Audience feedback

We conducted a questionnaire about our completed documentary radio trailer and print advert these are our results.



This is my class watching my documentary listening to my radio trailer and looking at my print advert. After this they completed my questionnaire. 





Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Radio script

    For many, bowling is an iconic pass time within American culture but in Britain bowling continues to increase in popularity from a leisure pursuit to a competitive sport.

But why have bowling alleys become the mainstay of retail parks?

[Voxpops]·   ‘I’m always going bowling with my mates, it’s a great laugh’
·   ‘Its fab because I can have a few drinks and a bite to eat as well’

And how do people go from casual bowler to league player?
·         ‘I’m dead competitive, I always have to win’
·         ‘Bowling takes my mind off everyday life’

Find out why the nation is increasingly bowled over by one of its favourite past-times...Watch Let It Roll, Thursday 9th January 7.30 on 4

Wednesday, 29 January 2014

Problems with interview

We arranged to do an interview with the manager of a bowling alley the interview was a success and he answered all the questions that were needed. However when we got back to school and uploaded the interview to the computer we realised that the microphone had not been switched on. So we had no sound throughout the interview. Unfortunately we could not reschedule this interview. 



Questions for Dave the manager

1.  How long have you been manager of the bowling alley and how did you get into the business?

2.  Do you enjoy working in the bowling alley?

3.  What’s your favourite thing about the bowling alley?

4.  How many bowling leagues do you have come in a week?

5.  Do you see bowling as more as a competitive thing or a social thing? Or both?

6.  What’s the most popular age group that attends the bowling alley? Is it families or young couples?

Tuesday, 28 January 2014

Editing Process



This is me and my group working as a team making our documentary , radio trailer and print advert.








Monday, 27 January 2014

Filming pictures

Here are different photos of us filming.

This is a interview we didn't end up using as the microphone was not plugged in correctly. Instead of re-scheduling this interview with her we decided to use somebody else but use the same framing for the interview.


This was one of our first trips out the bowling ally this is Steven and Gabby positioning the camera correctly onto the tripod.


The bowling ally that we did our filming in had very dark lighting so we used this LCD light when doing interviews to make the interview much brighter so the lighting looked better.



Planning

Opening sequence story board.
Firstly when beginning to create our documentary we had to plan our opening sequence which we made by creating a story board. We decided that we would use professional league bowler Steven Swaby to open our documentary. By using different shots of him bowling including close ups and medium close ups. We decided that he would role the ball down the lane in slow motion. then the sweep would come down and the title would appear " roll with it ".


Here is our framing for our interviews
Before filming the interviews we decided that we would plan our framing for each interview so that each frame looked professional and so each frame was different so it looked eye catching and didn't bore the audience.









Saturday, 25 January 2014

Running order


Running Order

Documentary – Roll With It
Channel: Channel 4
Scheduling: Tuesday 9th January 2014 at 7.30pm – 8.00pm
Duration: 27 minutes (including advert break)


Opening – Montage of people bowling with voice over
30 seconds
We will open the documentary by having a close-up of Steve’s face in which he is concentrating where he will roll the ball
3 seconds
We will then cut to a long shot of Steve getting ready to take his shot, in which he is posing and getting his positioning right
3 seconds
We will then cut to another long shot of Steve from the back in which he has taken in shot and is beginning to walk back
3 seconds
Next, we will cut to the ball rolling down the lane ready to strike the bowling pins
3 second
Then, the shot will cut to the ball hitting the pins and it will cause a strike. Once the strike has appeared, the shutter which clears the pins away will swipe down and the title ‘Roll With It’ will appear
7 seconds
History of Bowling – The voice over begins and information about the history of bowling begins. During this there will be old pictures and video clips appearing which will feature bowling from the past including bowling leagues and titles
15 seconds
Voxpops - After the opening, we will then cut to Voxpops of numerous people answering questions in which the mise-en-scene will be on the complex of New Brighton which is a very busy area
10 seconds
We will have Archive material of “let’s go bowling”- a glimpse of bowling once upon a time
30seconds
Archive material of 2013 PBA Don Carter classic title match”
30 Seconds
Montage of bowling again talking about its popularity today
6 seconds
Interview Number One - After the talk of past bowling leagues, we interview Steve the (league bowler 7th best in England) whilst he is talking, we will use cut aways of Steve bowling the ball down the lane striking the pins.
1 minute 6 seconds
Establishing/panning shot of the bowling lanes talking about why people come bowling
7 seconds
Before interview number two features, we will do a quick cut away of the bar in which the voiceover will talk about how people like to enjoy beverages during bowling games.
6 seconds
Interview Number Two - We will then cut to the interview with George talking about why he comes bowling and what else he does when he comes bowling. Whilst George is speaking we will use cut away of George playing pool and playing laser quest with his friends
2 minute 10 seconds
Voice over of health and safety when playing bowling whilst a cut away of the lanes getting oiled and glossed.
5 seconds
Montage of bowling down lanes with voice over
Interview Number Three - Cut to interview with Lennie about his job and what his job consists of whilst Lennie is talking his job and what it involves we will use cut away of him fixing the machines at the back of the bowling lanes.
2 minutes 40 seconds
We will then cut back to Steve interview talking about his trophies and achievements. We will use cut aways of Steve showing us his trophies Steve playing bowling with his top that says “Steve Swaby”.
1 minute
ADVERT BREAK
3 minutes
We will then cut to an interview with Niall talking about why he does not take part in bowling anymore
1 minute 40 seconds
We will then cut to a panning shot of the bowling ally
3 seconds
We will then cut to an interview with the second technician- Dave who will talk about health and safety of bowling, the dangers of bowling, the worst accident he has ever had whilst working and fixing the lanes.
1 minutes 50 seconds
We will then ask the public what else they do when they go bowling
10 seconds
Whilst having cuts of laser quest the bar and the arcades
4 seconds
We will then cut to an interview with the bar maid
1 minute 10 seconds
We will then have cuts of groups of friends by the bar drinking and socialising with their friends
15 seconds
We will then have a shot of the bowling league playing
5 seconds
We will then cut to an interview with the league manager talking about his league we will have cutaways of him showing his league bowlers shoes, bowlers uniform, bowlers uniform
1 minute 50 seconds
The will be a voice over about bowling and how it has influenced Hollywood films
15 seconds
Cut away of a part of  the film Grease 2
15 seconds
We will then have people bowling down the lanes
5 seconds
Whilst there is a voice over with bowling facts whilst people are bowling down the lanes
5 seconds
We will then cut to news paper articles about the most famous bowling player with a voice over about the famous league player
10 Seconds
We will then cut to a cutaway of the kitchen in the bowling alley were families enjoy dinner and refreshments when playing bowling
5 seconds
We will then cut to an interview with the cooks in the kitchen talking about what type of people they think are mostly like to come bowling  and if they see bowling as a social or competitive sport
2 minutes
We will then cut to an interview with the manager of Riverside bowling alley
David Newton who talks to us about what he provides for the public at his bowling alley. Also what type of people come to the bowling alley and if sees bowling as a social or competitive sport. We will have cut aways whilst the interview is taking place of the public playing bowling.
2 minutes 40 seconds
We will then cut to an interview with Parents who take their children bowling for their birthday parties they tell us about why they choose bowling.
1 minute
We then cut to a cutaway of Children playing bowling at their birthday parties
20 seconds
We then cut to a panning shot of the bowling international competition with a voice over explaining the event and what happens in the event.
20 seconds